DRAFT 1 ( Opening our film)

This was our first draft Changes that were to be made: 1)The Titles were not in the right order 2)The font had to be changed making it look more professinal 3)We showed our draft to some members of our target audience and they advised us and told us to change some things like the the font and some changes with the voicemail at the start 4)More scenes had to added. 5) The title of the film had to be done